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XFactor
07-23-2005, 11:44 AM
I need to create a tag line for my company. I just developed a logo and would like to have a tag line to go with it. The most popular tag line in the industry is "We meet the nicest people by accident". We've been in business for 10 years with no logo and no tag line. It's time to step up and out of the dark ages. HELP!!
Here's the logo. What do you think?
http://www2.***boat.com/image_center/data/520/243Logo_Sample.bmp

Bre
07-23-2005, 11:48 AM
I think you need a new logo.

mbrown2
07-23-2005, 11:49 AM
I think you could spice up the logo a bit....send a PM to H2OSKIFast..
"Your Dent is our Problem"
"Making the world a better place, one dent at a time"
"Your Car needs a Make Over"
"The Auto Swan"
I will think of more....

Keithb87
07-23-2005, 11:49 AM
fixing the world one "rearend" at a time..

sleekcraft137
07-23-2005, 11:50 AM
I think you can do better with your logo Glenn. Your a creative guy right???

XFactor
07-23-2005, 11:51 AM
I think you need a new logo.
That is the new logo. :cry: That's ok! My wife doesn't like it either. I think it fits our industry very well. It definetly needs to be cleaned up a bit.

mbrown2
07-23-2005, 11:52 AM
The Costmetic Surgeon of the Cars...
Fixing your Auto Nip, Tuck, and Roll

Bre
07-23-2005, 11:52 AM
That is the new logo. :cry: That's ok! My wife doesn't like it either. I think it fits our industry very well. It definetly needs to be cleaned up a bit.
It needs to be blinged out LOL.. it looks way too plain.. plain is good sometimes...but it just doesn't look right.

mbrown2
07-23-2005, 11:55 AM
On the logo...I had a thought:
car across the top of the company name....dented up and such....morphed downward into company name and at the bottom of company name same car shiny and new....at least 4-5 colors so it comes across very clear...kind of a transformational thing...

sleekcraft137
07-23-2005, 11:57 AM
Hey by the way Glenn we're coming down next weekend

XFactor
07-23-2005, 12:03 PM
You're all probably right on the logo. It does need some work. This is the deal. I have a 16x8 sign that can be seen from the 110 FWY. If the sign is to complicated (to much stuff) it will never stick in anybodys mind. I think simple is good in this case. I will also have a small reference sign at 2 dealerships that we're affiliated with. I want brand recognition making it very easy for a customer to identify the shop when they leave the dealership and head to the shop.

XFactor
07-23-2005, 12:04 PM
Hey by the way Glenn we're coming down next weekend
Call me and maybe we can get together for a BBQ.

sleekcraft137
07-23-2005, 12:07 PM
will do

NashvilleBound
07-23-2005, 12:11 PM
I think you guys just pee'd in his cherrios, so to speak. Rained on his parade? ...one of those. I thought the logo was alright. A good tag would help.

Bre
07-23-2005, 12:17 PM
I think you guys just pee'd in his cherrios, so to speak. Rained on his parade? ...one of those. I thought the logo was alright. A good tag would help.
Nope... just being honest.. we are all friends here... you'll be surprised how much a cool logo can do for your business sometimes.

RiverDave
07-23-2005, 12:21 PM
I gotta second the motion on the logo.. Hit up Dennis at SignFX He did my logo and I'm pretty stoked with it. :)
www.cuttingedgemarine.com
RD

mondorally
07-23-2005, 12:27 PM
Its no accident we're the best
Great service doesn't happen by accident
We'll fix a dent..... without doing the same to your wallet
Justin

XFactor
07-23-2005, 12:44 PM
Its no accident we're the best
Great service doesn't happen by accident
We'll fix a dent..... without doing the same to your wallet
Justin
Nice. I like those.
Here's the polished version of the logo no one seems to like.
My taste sucks!!! :mad:
I'm glad I let my daughter influence my decision on graphics for the boat. :D
http://www2.***boat.com/image_center/data/520/243logo-final.jpg

sleekcraft137
07-23-2005, 12:52 PM
what if you outline the car body in red??

XFactor
07-23-2005, 01:00 PM
what if you outline the car body in red??
I tried that. It looks goofy. It looked good outlined in blue with a silver center, but 3 color is way more expensive for print on signs, letterhead, envelopes, ect, ect....
Sorry. I'm cheap!!

sleekcraft137
07-23-2005, 01:02 PM
HEY ME TOO!!!! :rollside:

Water Romper
07-23-2005, 01:13 PM
Actually, I don’t thinks its that bad… :)
What you should REALLY do is market you’re “marketing”…..meaning, take all input from the posts, narrow it down to say 3, post those three and whichever one gets the most votes wins and your new tagline AND you give the winner (the person who gave you the idea) recognition in the forum and a gift cert. for $50.00 at a major chain restaurant. :rollside:

mondorally
07-23-2005, 01:54 PM
Its no accident we're the best
Great service doesn't happen by accident
We'll fix a dent..... without doing the same to your wallet
Justin
A few more
We'll save you the cash to fix it after the crash
This one is direct marketing to the guys concerned about their image
You can't hump her if you have a dented bumper!
Crashed last night? Give us a chance to fix it right.
OK, now I'm stretching.........
Justin

rrrr
07-23-2005, 02:03 PM
"WE'RE NUMBER ONE IN THE NUMBER TWO BUSINESS"
Uh, wait a second.
"BEST PLACE TO TAKE A LEAK"
No, no, don't tell me, I'll get it here in a minute. :hammerhea :hammerhea :hammerhea

JB in so cal
07-23-2005, 02:06 PM
"Our paint fumes are the shiznit"
"We'll put the ing back in your Bling"
"Hurry in, I need boat-gas money"
"We won't send you to Enterprise"
I think the heat is gettin' to me. :cool:

canuck1
07-23-2005, 02:14 PM
You fu ck it up we fix it up?

XFactor
07-23-2005, 02:21 PM
"Our paint fumes are the shiznit"
"We'll put the ing back in your Bling"
"Hurry in, I need boat-gas money""We won't send you to Enterprise"
I think the heat is gettin' to me. :cool:
Definetly my favorite so far! :D
Might as well be honest.